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The Last Train to Nowhere
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The Last Train to Nowhere

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A man woke up on a cold bench in an empty train station. He had no idea who he was. His pockets were empty except for one thing: a train ticket. It read "Departure: Now. Destination: Veliska." He had never heard of Veliska. The big board above him was blank. No people, no trains, no sound. Just him and a ticket to a place he didn't know.

He decided to search the station instead of waiting. He checked his jacket again and found a folded map tucked in the lining. He opened it and read every city name. Veliska was not on it. But someone had drawn a small red circle in an empty spot, where no town should be.

He decided the circle was a trick and crushed the map in his fist. The station lights dimmed at once. A cold voice spoke through the speakers: "Wrong choice. The map was the only way out." One by one, the exit doors locked with heavy clicks. He was alone in the dark, and no train would ever come for him now.

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