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The Cartographer of Forgotten Coasts

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Edda grabbed the chart and ran to the docks. Sure enough, three trading ships were turning toward the new bay she had drawn — straight at the rocks she'd inked. She had to warn them. She lit a lantern, swung it over her head, and shouted for the captains to turn back.

A young sailor on the nearest ship spotted Edda waving and rang the alarm bell. The crews scrambled. All three ships dropped anchor just short of the rocks, sails flapping, safe for now. The captains rowed ashore, furious, demanding to know who had put a deadly coast on their maps overnight.

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Edda promised the captains she would fix it. She climbed to the clifftop she had drawn, sat down, and carefully inked a safe deep channel leading the ships past the rocks and into the harbor. One by one the ships followed the new route home. The captains shook her hand, grateful, and Edda finally let herself smile.

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