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The boat reached the exact spot at noon. The water was flat and still, almost too calm. Reyes cut the engine. 'Your grandmother lost something here,' he said. He handed me a pair of old diving goggles and pointed down. 'Look for yourself.'
I stared into the water but saw only blue. Then a shadow moved below — big, slow, circling. I scrambled back from the rail. Reyes laughed softly. 'Just a sea turtle, kid. Old as the hills. Your grandmother named him. She came here every year.'
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Reyes said Grandma fed the turtle every visit and talked to him like an old friend. I leaned over and dropped a piece of bread. The turtle rose, took it gently, and looked right at me. It felt like Grandma saying hello. I went home lighter than I'd felt in months.
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