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Ninety Fathoms to Anywhere
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Sefu was already waiting. Sefu: 'You look like him now.' Me: 'Dad?' Sefu: 'Yeah.' It hit different than I expected. I'd been trying not to think about Dad. Sefu: 'You ready for this?'
Sefu sat down on the wet floor. Sefu: 'He told me he was proud of you. Near the end.' Me: 'He said that?' Sefu: 'I listened when you weren't around.' Me: 'Why didn't you tell me?' Sefu: 'I'm telling you now.'
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Me: 'I'm sorry I wasn't here.' Sefu: 'I know.' We stood in silence. The boathouse creaked. Sefu: 'He built something down there. Something important.' Me: 'How do you know?' Sefu: 'I went down once. Three months ago.'
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