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Nobody Reported the Tide

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The house at the end of Pelican Road was real, but boarded up and empty for years. A faded sign said it belonged to some trust Marsh had never heard of. He took photos, then spotted fresh tire tracks in the sand out back.

Marsh pried a board off a window and climbed inside. The house wasn't empty at all. The walls were covered in printed claim forms, dozens of them, each with a different name and the same three-day countdown.

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One form on the wall stopped him cold. It had his own name, his own address, and a date three days from today. Marsh backed toward the window — and heard the boards he'd pried loose being nailed shut again, from outside.

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