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Counterfeit Constellations

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Priya texted the one person who'd believe her: Marcus, who ran the school's tiny astronomy club. "New star in Cassiopeia. Not on any map. Get up here." Three dots appeared, then his reply: "On my way. Don't tell anyone yet." The warning made her stomach flip. Why keep it secret?

Marcus arrived out of breath, lugging a fancy camera. He took one look through it and went pale. "Priya, that's not a star and it's not a satellite. The color's all wrong. And whatever it is, it's pointed right at this rooftop." They both turned slowly to stare at the blue dot, suddenly feeling very watched.

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They followed the beam's angle and spotted a drone hovering silently above the next building. Marcus waved his arms, and the drone slowly dropped onto the roof. A speaker on it crackled to life: "Nice work finding me. I'm a contest. First to spot me wins a real telescope." Priya and Marcus high-fived. They'd won.

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