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The Confession Booth Recordings

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Coyle's hands shook. He rewound and listened again. The woman kept talking. She described a man's body, a frozen pond, a winter long ago. He knew the voice but couldn't place it. He grabbed the whole box of tapes and carried them home to listen to every one.

By dawn Coyle had it figured out. The woman on the tape was Margaret Hale, who still ran the bakery on Main Street. The man she'd confessed to killing was her own husband, gone "missing" forty years back. Coyle washed his face and decided to go buy a loaf of bread.

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Margaret took one look at Coyle's face and knew. She set down her rolling pin, locked the shop, and turned the sign to CLOSED. "You found Walter's tapes," she said quietly. "He promised to burn them. Sit down, Father. Let me make you tea, and I'll tell you the whole thing."

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