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The Tenants Below the Frost Line

horror◐ Teen
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I asked Mrs. Edevane what the frost line was. She pointed at my feet. "You'll feel it. The step where the air turns to ice. Below that, the house stops being yours." Then she left a thermos of soup and hurried home. I stood at the top of the stairs, looking down into the dark.

I dragged our heavy bookshelf to the top of the stairs and shoved it across the doorway. That night the tapping started anyway, but now it sounded angry. The bookshelf slid an inch toward me, then another, scraping across the floor. I leaned my whole weight against it and held on until sunrise. We never opened that door again. But every night it slides a little closer, and one night I won't be strong enough to hold it.

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