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The Tenants Below the Frost Line

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Dad laughed off the warning and called Hollow Marsh "charmingly weird." That night I heard tapping under the floor. Slow, patient knocks, coming up through the concrete from somewhere far below the cold floor we'd already seen. Tap. Tap-tap. Like something asking to be let in.

I woke Dad and made him listen. The tapping stopped the second he sat up, like it was shy of grown-ups. "Old pipes," he yawned. But in the morning we found wet footprints leading up from the cellar door, across the kitchen, and stopping at the foot of Theo's bed. Theo was still asleep, smiling. From then on the footprints came every night, and each morning they stopped a little closer to where I slept.

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