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The Tenants Below the Frost Line

horror◐ Teen
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I chased Theo down, grabbing his hood just past step twenty. He pointed deeper into the dark. "There's people down there," he whispered. "They waved at me." I looked. Far below the frost line, pale shapes stood in a row, perfectly still, all of them facing up at us.

Dad finally believed us and called a town meeting. The neighbors just nodded sadly. "Everyone feeds the deep," the oldest one said. "One person, once a generation. That's the rent. You're new, so you're behind on payments." The room went quiet, and they all looked at little Theo.

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