StoryTree
you are here

Ash Vector

sci-fi◐ Mature
5 contributors · 5 paragraphs deep

Mara found a second sound in the rock cores: a counter-word that closed what the first one opened. To play it, she'd have to let the word into her own mouth first, then force the counter-word out right behind it. One slip and she'd be gone. She set her recorder and opened her mouth.

Mara broadcast the counter-word over the whole base comms instead of risking her own voice. It freed some of them, but the sound was incomplete without a living throat to anchor it. Half the workers dropped free. The other half turned toward the speakers and chanted louder, coming for her.

↔ version 2 of 2 of this paragraph — hover its sides to flip. The card below is what happens next.

What happens next?

0 ways forward
Vote share across the top 0 branches
No futures yet — be the one who decides what happens next.