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Threadbare Crown
fantasy · ◐ Teen
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Threadbare Crown

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In Veil, no king or queen is born to the throne. The Great Loom decides. Every few years it weaves a new tapestry, and the face in the silver thread becomes the next monarch. Mira, a seamstress's daughter, was sweeping spindle-dust in the workshop when the new cloth was unveiled. She glanced up and forgot how to breathe. Woven in living silver was a girl with her exact face. Hers. Before she could move, two royal guards stepped through the door and looked straight at her.

Mira's knees shook, but she did not run. The guards bowed low, right there on the dusty workshop floor. "Your Majesty," the older one said. "The Loom has chosen you. You must come to the palace at once." Mira swallowed hard and nodded, deciding the safest thing was to play along and learn the rules from the inside.

The palace was all marble and whispers. A sharp-eyed advisor named Lord Castet greeted Mira with a smile that didn't reach his eyes. "The coronation is in three days," he said. "Until then, you'll do exactly as I say." Mira smiled back and quietly decided Castet was the first person she needed to watch.

That night Mira searched Castet's study and found a stack of sketches: her own face, copied again and again, each one practiced. He had drawn her likeness for weeks. The real Loom hadn't chosen her at all. Castet had forged the cloth to put a poor, friendless girl on the throne, a queen he could control. Mira pocketed the proof.

Mira gathered the sketches and burst into the throne room during morning court. She held them high for every noble to see. "Lord Castet forged the cloth! He drew my face himself!" she cried. Castet lunged for the papers, but a dozen nobles had already seen them. They seized him on the spot, and the hall roared for the Loom to weave the real monarch.

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