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Pocketful of Tame Wishes

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The first name was Tomas Bell, the baker down the lane. His jar glowed faint orange and smelled of burnt bread. The note said he'd wished his loaves would 'never go cold.' Wren grabbed the jar and ran to the bakery, where smoke was pouring out of every window.

Tomas wasn't even there. The oven roared on its own, baking loaf after loaf that piled up and spilled out the door. The bread was rolling down the street in a warm, lumpy heap. Wren chased after it, jar in hand, dodging the loaves as they bounced past her boots.

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Wren ran ahead of the bread and held up the jar. 'You don't have to keep baking,' she said gently. 'Feed the lane, then rest.' The loaves slowed and settled into a tidy pile on the cobbles. Doors opened and neighbors carried the warm bread home, laughing. The orange glow faded soft and calm. One wish, mended in the street.

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