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Bottle, Map, and Bicycle

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On the first morning of summer, Pip ran down to the beach and almost tripped over her dog Biscuit. He had a green bottle in his jaws, washed up between two rocks. Pip pried it open. Inside was a paper torn down the middle: half a coastline in faded blue ink, and one word left at the rip. It said HARBOR.

Pip decided to ask a grown-up first. She biked straight to Mr. Alvi's bait shop at the pier, where the old sailors traded stories. If anyone knew about a torn map and a word like HARBOR, it would be the man who had fished this coast for fifty years.

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Mr. Alvi held the map to the light and laughed. "My grandfather drew this. He split it in two and hid the halves so only a real adventurer could join them." He pulled a dusty tin from under the counter. "This half has waited forty years. Go on, fit them together."

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