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No Country for the Tide

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Halloran took the dinghy and rowed for the gray smear of mud where the island was rising. The notebook said: dig at the broken church, ten paces north of the bell. He hit the flats and ran, boots sinking in the muck, the clock already ticking in his chest.

Halloran reached the church, but someone had beaten him to it. Fresh dig marks scarred the mud, and a lantern still burned by a half-open hole. A woman stood over it, pistol raised, eyes wild. "You're forty years too late," she said. "And I'm not sharing."

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Halloran raised his empty hands. "Then tell me what you're not sharing," he said, "because the tide's coming and neither of us makes it off this mud alone." The woman's gun wavered. She glanced at the rising water, then back at him, and slowly lowered the pistol. "Help me lift it," she said. "Fast."

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