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The Dragon Who Hoarded Names

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Warm air breathed out of the cave mouth. The girl stepped inside and saw thousands of names glowing on the walls, each one a tiny silver coin. At the center coiled Vesper, huge and patient. 'A visitor,' the dragon rumbled. 'Most run. You climbed. Tell me your name.' The girl opened her mouth and nothing came out.

Instead of trying to speak again, the girl picked up a sharp stone and scratched one word into the cave floor: WHY. Vesper blinked, surprised. 'Why do I hoard names? Because a name is the truest thing a person owns. Hold enough of them, and you hold a piece of everyone.'

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The girl wrote one more thing: YOU LONELY? Vesper recoiled as if struck. In all her centuries of hoarding the names of others, no one had ever asked about hers. Slowly the dragon nodded, and a single warm tear hissed against the cold stone floor.

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