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Eleven Mostly-Functional Adults

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We followed the crayon maze down a hallway to a door marked "VAULT" in fancy gold letters. "No way," breathed Lola. "The mouse was right." She pushed it open. Inside sat one enormous cheese wheel on a velvet pillow, glowing under a spotlight.

As we stood there admiring the cheese, a cheerful recorded voice played from the ceiling. "Thank you for visiting the Cheese Vault Experience! Photos are five dollars!" Lola's shoulders dropped. We weren't in a vault. We were in a tourist photo booth. So we shoved five bucks in the slot, crowded in around the wax wheel, and took the dumbest group photo of our lives. Best heist of the year.

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