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Eleven Mostly-Functional Adults

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Marv crept forward and walked straight into a coat rack, which crashed down with a sound like a small avalanche. We all held our breath. Nothing happened. "See?" Marv whispered proudly. "Stealth." Lola put her face in her hands.

Marv reached the kitchen and found a giant cheese fountain, still warm, gurgling away. "The motherlode," he whispered. He leaned in for a closer look and his tie dipped straight into the melted cheese. He tugged. The whole fountain wobbled toward him.

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The cheese fountain tipped right over and dumped warm gruyere across the entire kitchen floor. Marv slid across it on his back like a hockey puck and crashed into the spice rack. He sat up, covered head to toe in cheese, and gave a thumbs up. "Mission... mostly successful."

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