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Dead Letters to Tomorrow

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At noon the newspaper thumped onto his porch, dated the next day. The front page screamed: BRIDGE COLLAPSES ON RIVER ROAD, FIVE HURT. Edwin's stomach dropped. The accident hadn't happened yet. He could still stop it.

Edwin called the town office instead of going himself. A bored clerk wrote down his warning and promised to 'look into it.' Edwin paced all day, sick with worry, not knowing if anyone would act in time.

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The clerk actually called the road crew. They closed the bridge at dawn 'for inspection.' When it finally cracked that afternoon, the road was already blocked off. Edwin watched the news that night and saw his warning had worked, even if no one knew it was him.

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