StoryTree
you are here

The Other Hand on the Wheel

sci-fi◐ Mature
5 contributors · 4 paragraphs deep

As Mara lets go of the package, the other Mara grabs her wrist. 'Wait. What's the date on your slip?' Mara reads it out. The other woman goes pale. 'That's wrong. That's tomorrow. You came back too far.' The package feels suddenly heavier in the space between them.

They open the slip together and the ink is rewriting itself as they watch, the date crawling forward one minute at a time. 'It's correcting,' the other Mara whispers. 'The loop is fixing the mistake. When the dates match, one of us stops existing.' Mara checks her watch. Two minutes to match.

↔ version 1 of 2 of this paragraph — hover its sides to flip. The card below is what happens next.

What happens next?

2 ways forward
Vote share across the top 2 branches
A possible continuation

Mara won't wait for the dates to match. She tears the slip in half. The ink stops crawling and bleeds off the paper into nothing. Both women look down at their hands, still there, both still breathing. 'You broke it,' the other Mara says, almost laughing. The timer on the dash just stops. No more drop, no more loop, just two women alone in a wet parking lot, free.

IF
Inés Ferro
6 votes · future 1 of 2