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Cold War, Long Light

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Calder lets go of whatever was under the table. "You think the target is each other," he says. "It isn't. The second we're both fighting over belongs to someone else in this room." He nods toward the counter, where a tired woman is paying for tea and checking her watch.

Vesna looks at the tired woman. "Her? Why does one second of her life matter?" Calder says, "In your future, she lives and signs a treaty. In mine, she trips at 2:15, misses her meeting, and a war ends a different way." The woman picks up her tea and turns toward the door.

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Vesna stands and walks straight to the woman. She catches her elbow just before the doorway. "Careful," she says, "the step's slick." The woman smiles, thanks her, and walks out safe. The clock clicks to 2:15. Nobody dies. Then Calder joins her on the sidewalk, his device dark. "My future is gone," he says, "but maybe a new one starts here." The hour, at last, moves on.

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Bram de Vries
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