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She Was Never Here

sci-fi◐ Teen
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The strand resists. It snaps back toward the water like something is pulling on the other end. Mara braces both hands and pulls harder. The machine screams. Sparks fly from the needle of light. She knows if she lets go now, Eli goes to the river. So she doesn't let go.

Mara pulls with everything she has and the thread tears free of the river for good. The machine dies in a shower of sparks, the needle of light going dark. Silence. Upstairs, the front door opens. Eli calls out that he took the long way through town and missed the rain. Alive. Home. The machine is broken now, and Mara is glad. Some threads should never be touched again.

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