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Returned With Notes

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I flip to the inside cover and write it big: 'WHO ARE YOU?' Then, smaller: 'Your notes are better than the book. And this is my favorite book.' I put it back in the box before I can chicken out. Three days. Nothing. Day four, the book is back. There's blue ink under my question.

Under my 'WHO ARE YOU?' the blue pen wrote: 'Not yet. If I tell you, you'll picture someone, and then I have to live up to the picture.' 'Finish the book with me instead. I only reply to notes. Deal?' Below that, they underlined a sentence in chapter 9 and wrote: 'Start here. Tell me you didn't cry.' I did cry. In 2019. In a laundromat. Deal.

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We finish the book one chapter at a time. Their notes get longer. So do mine. Chapter 20, they write: 'You read people the way you read books. Too generous.' Me, under it: 'Nobody's ever accused me of that before.' Then I reach the last page — past 'The End' — and there's a full paragraph in blue, waiting. It starts with: 'Okay. The book is finished, so here's the truth I owe you.'

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Zadie Quinn
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