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Nobody Reported the Tide

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Marsh was reading drowning files at 3am when the pattern hit him. Six bodies from Saltcreek. Six insurance claims filed three days before each one drowned—all for water damage to the same beach house. A house none of them owned. He printed them all, spread them on his desk, and stared until it clicked: nobody reported the tide.

I called the insurance company at 6am. "I need to know who filed these claims." Silence. Then: "Sir, those are active claims. I can't—" "Someone's dead. Six someones." The line clicked dead. A minute later, my phone rang from a blocked number. "Stop asking about the house," a voice said. Then nothing.

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The blocked number location pinged from the motel on Route 9, room 7. I drove there. Knocked. No answer. But I heard movement. "Go away," a man's voice said. "I can't help you." "Help me with what?" The door cracked open. His eyes were tired. "With understanding what you're not supposed to."

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