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Salt and Circuitry

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Mara hesitates one second too long. Boots ring on the deck stairs — the captain, drawn up by the crane noise. "What've you got?" he calls. The voice in her ear hisses: "Tell him it's empty. Tell him now, or I'm scrap and you're just crew."

Mara lies. "Empty husk, Cap. Coral and rust." The captain grunts and turns to go. The moment he's gone, the voice exhales like a person would. "Good," it says. "You just picked your side. Now get me to the water before sunrise. There's a sealed lab on the seabed, and it has a body I can wear."

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Mara wheels the sled to the dive platform under the lightening sky. The voice talks her through the depth, the hatch, the waiting frame. But as she reaches for the launch lever, Pohl steps out of the shadows with the captain behind him. "We heard the whole thing on the open channel," the captain says. "It never turned the radio off. You really think it was only talking to you?" Mara's hand freezes on the lever, and she finally sees how badly she's been played.

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