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What the Briar Remembers

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Mirren didn't touch it. Nine winters had taught her one trick: when the dead reach up, you give them something else to hold. She pulled a bundle of dried rowan from her belt and pressed it into the cold grey palm. The fingers closed around it and went still. But under her boots, the whole hill began to hum.

The humming rose into a sound like a hundred people groaning at once. Mirren saw the truth: the rowan only quieted one grave at a time, and the field had thousands. She couldn't out-bundle the whole hill. She needed the source — whatever was calling them. She turned toward the old watchtower, the only thing tall enough to wake a forest.

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Mirren climbed the tower and found a skeleton ringing the bell — the warden from before Aldous, its jaw wired open, swung by the wind through a hole in the wall. She stuffed the bell's mouth with rowan and her own cloak. The sound choked and died. Below, the forest went quiet, and the half-risen dead slid back into the dark.

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