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Then Grandma herself typed. The chat went still. Grandma: "Wrong number or not, nobody who has seen the word biryani in this chat leaves this chat." Me: "That's not... how anything works?" Grandma: "Sunday. 6pm. You are family now." Someone sent a location pin. It was 20 minutes from my house.

Sunday came. I stood outside the house holding a box of sweets from the shop, like a man about to take an exam he didn't study for. Through the window: at least 15 people. The smell of biryani reached the street. I rang the bell. Footsteps. A voice yelled, "THE NEW NUMBER IS HERE!"

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The door swung open. Grandma looked exactly like her profile picture. She looked at me, then at the sweet box. Grandma: "You brought from the shop." Me: "...Yes." Grandma: "Good. Danish brought fruit again. Come in, you're the normal one." That was two years ago. I have never missed a Sunday since. I still don't know whose number this was supposed to be.

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