Rafael Cruz
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'The footage is corrupted,' Mrs. Pratt says. Her voice sounds wrong. 'Look. There's a blur here. And here. And here. Like something is erasing itself.…
▲ 7 votesI rewind it. Play it again. Same thing. The pumpkin rolls. No hands. I look at Mrs. Pratt. 'That's not how physics works.' Mrs. Pratt closes her phone…
▲ 12 votesMr. Okafor is already at the gate when I turn around. Just standing there. Staring at his empty plot. His hands are in his pockets. He hasn't noticed …
▲ 9 votesI measure it out with my steps. Thirty-seven paces. Too far. It didn't roll. Someone carried it. Someone strong carried Mr. Okafor's prize pumpkin acr…
▲ 6 votesCarol appeared at the basement stairs. "You've been in here an hour," she said. "You read the journal." I turned to face her. "You've already decided.…
▲ 11 votesThe house sits on the bluff above Saltcreek. One story, weathered, shutters half-closed. The mailbox says "CURRENT RESIDENT" but the deed says it's be…
▲ 7 votesI dug into the claims. Different people filed each one. Names: Martin Cole, Sue Roth, David Kim. But the damage descriptions—identical. Same inspector…
▲ 6 votesI flip to the inside cover and write it big: 'WHO ARE YOU?' Then, smaller: 'Your notes are better than the book. And this is my favorite book.' I put …
▲ 6 votesThe place two blocks over really does let you sit for hours. We test it. They defend their take on the ending for twenty solid minutes. They're wrong.…
▲ 6 votesA week goes by. Then two. The box fills with cookbooks and a phone manual. No blue pen. Fine. It was a stranger. It was nothing. Week three, my book i…
▲ 5 votesTwo days later the book is back. Every note answered. Under my 'Your move' they wrote: 'Okay. New rules. You pick the next book. Anything. I'll read w…
▲ 10 votesThe poll ended 9 to 5. YES. Nine strangers believed in me. Uncle Tariq: "Fine. But if this goes like the fruit, you're finished." Sunday, I walked in …
▲ 6 votesUncle Tariq: "Admit it, Bilal. New number, same tricks. Last Eid you 'lost your phone' when it was your turn to bring drinks." Me: "I am genuinely a s…
▲ 4 votesThe man behind the counter came back looking sick. "Twenty-three pictures," he said. "They're all the same." Every photo was our family, sleeping. Dif…
▲ 9 votesMe: "mom, it's still IN the chat. it can read everything we say." The second I sent that, the gray circle messaged me privately. "Your mother is lying…
▲ 2 votesDad followed the ticking to the attic. We crowded behind him with our phone flashlights. It was in a shoebox of old baby clothes. Grandpa's watch. Tic…
▲ 10 votesSam started crying. Mom turned the wifi off at the wall, like that would do anything. The gray circle posted one more time: "New rule. Nobody leaves t…
▲ 7 votesThe gray circle: "Tell your dad I like his slippers." Dad screamed. We all burst out of our rooms at once — and the hallway was empty. Dad stood alone…
▲ 4 votesDad spun around. We heard him yell "WHO'S THERE" right through the floor. Dad: "nothing. there's nothing here." The gray circle: "He's looking too low…
▲ 9 votesVesna couldn't help it. Halfway up the first slope, out of Doru's sight, she knelt by the sled and pried up a corner of the nearest crate lid with her…
▲ 8 votesThere was no time to outrun it. The snow swept the sled away and rolled Vesna down the mountain in a roaring white tumble. She came to rest in the dar…
▲ 4 votesTwo hours up, a light flicked on across the valley, then another. Lanterns. Someone was following her tracks in the snow, moving fast and in a line. T…
▲ 8 votesI knocked the name cards off the table and turned to leave. The footprints on the floor had multiplied, leading every direction at once, and the stair…
▲ 4 votesInstead of filming, I followed the kitchen out into a hallway. My lamp found a staircase going up, the steps strangely free of mud. Most of Hesper was…
▲ 7 votesI froze, and that was my mistake. The four faceless figures crossed the kitchen without seeming to move, and the nearest one pressed its smooth face t…
▲ 4 votesI knelt by the small plate on the floor. Scratched into the dried silt beside it was one word: STAY. My air gauge clicked in my ear. When I looked up,…
▲ 8 votesVesna sees it too late. The woman is lying to make her drop her guard. The numbers were a trap all along, looping her right into Calder's last revenge…
▲ 5 votesVesna stops waiting. Under the table she thumbs the small device in her coat, the one that crushes a single second flat. She locks onto Calder's timel…
▲ 9 votesCalder lets go of whatever was under the table. "You think the target is each other," he says. "It isn't. The second we're both fighting over belongs …
▲ 9 votesMira pressed the last key. The eleven notes shot out into the dark like a signal, racing back through three winters to a cold girl on the steps who ne…
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